Today for one of our tasks we had to right our own version of Jack and the beanstalk. To make it more difficult we had to make it exactly 100 words! We also had to make a different ending instead of Jack taking more than he needed he had to only take 5 gold coins.
Here is my story!
Yesterday Jack had traded their cow for magic beans and his mother had threw them out the window but
today jack looked out his window and saw a beanstalk so he climbed up it. When he got to the top he saw
a castle so he snuck inside. The first thing he saw when he got inside was a bag of five coins, Jack took
them but unfortunately at that moment a giant saw him and chased him down the beanstalk but he had
heart attack so Jack and his mum lived happily with there much needed five gold coins.
Ka pai Noah. Thanks for sharing your ending. I'm happy for Jack and his mum but sad for the giant! Was it hard to make it exactly 100 words? Careful with your homophones like write and right and there and their.
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